Friday, 6 March 2015

It Doesn't Last


Riding in his car, I looked over at my man and smiled. So strong, so handsome, how could anything go wrong?

We were different, we were meant to be together. Nothing could get to us. We loved each too much!

But suddenly that's all gone! How did this happen? How did we stop talking? Why aren't we always around each other.

What happened to 'us'? Why can't things stay the same forever? Why did we have to be like everyone else? Why aren't can't we have a fairy tale?

Walking around a shop, I see him through the shelves. I look down, pretending I didn't notice him. A tear slips down my face. It's all so wrong. Why?

This is so rough, but I haven't written anything like it for ages. I just wanted to play around and see what would happen. So here you are. BTW, I've a post coming soon on Pixabay!
-Kat 

18 comments :

  1. Aimee Van6 March 2015 at 16:17

    What's Pixabay? I'm excited to read your post!
    This is so beautiful, Kat. With love, unfortunately, comes heart-break.

    Cloudy Dreams//Blog

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    1. Kat6 March 2015 at 16:19

      It's an image site which I found! It's where I got the image above.
      Thank you! It's sad, but with younger love, sadly true.

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  2. jodie6 March 2015 at 20:20

    Nice and succinct :) well written!

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  3. autumn6 March 2015 at 22:40

    You really have a knack for this :)

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  4. Rosie7 March 2015 at 03:36

    This is lovely, Kat. :)

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  5. Elle 7 March 2015 at 03:45

    Oh my god.....A bit of me just died inside ♥

    You are talented beyond belief. How can you write like that?! TEACH ME!
    You should definitely write more posts like this. I write a bit, but not as good as this. I would be honoured if you would take a little look maybe? Comment?
    www.blindeyesoftheworld.blogspot.com
    Just up there^ Thank you so much!

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    1. Kat8 March 2015 at 14:44

      I'm so glad you like this!
      I'd love to write more. It's really what I enjoy doing. Writing random things and having people read and review them.
      I'm looking up now! Thank you for sharing the link. I'm looking forward to reading it.

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  6. Eve7 March 2015 at 05:46

    Beautiful, Kat! Ah, love. Such a lovely feeling, but when it's young, it's ever so fleeting. Stay strong. <3

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    1. Kat8 March 2015 at 17:42

      Thank you! That's the perfect way of phrasing it.

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  7. Heather7 March 2015 at 08:35

    Interesting concept—I'd like to know more!

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  8. Liz10 March 2015 at 11:35

    Oh gosh...this is so sad. :( But so good, too.

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  9. CG @ Paper Fury10 March 2015 at 17:02

    I LIKE IT. I WANTED TO READ MORE. And then it ended. *glares*
    hehe, Just kidding. ;-) Well done, Kat!

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    1. Kat10 March 2015 at 17:48

      Thank you! Maybe it was a bit short? Should I try something long perhaps?

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