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I pick up the speed. My breath is coming in pants. My sides are heaving. I'm exhausted, but something keeps me running. Perhaps it's fear.
I round a bend. I've twisted my ankle. I feel like crying. I try to pull myself back onto my feet.
Suddenly I feel a hand on my shoulder. I turn painfully. My heart is in my mouth. Is it him? Has he found me?
A giggle exscapes my mouth. It's only Sally, her grin telling me that's it all ok. I'm fine. I've lost him, or was it all in my mind?
Sorry this is rough. It's kinda a new style of writing.
-Kat
This is a great piece of writing!
ReplyDeleteThanks Jollygirl:)
DeleteDeep, enticing, I want to read more.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Oakstar.
ReplyDeleteI need to read more, Kat!
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More is coming!
DeleteI love this! I think you did a phenomenal job considering this is a new style of writing for you!
ReplyDelete-Lauren
Thanks Lauren. I wasn't too sure about sharing it!
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